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It's so trite. Premeditated and concise. Too much like something that you would like. Angular and rigid, tired and frigid. How is it that you can make something as beautiful as Mozart boring? When the strings should be raving, thrashing, roaring? Maybe it's just that particular recording. Either way, you've made it dull. You've made it a pain. I'd even go so far as to say you've made it annoying. So, congratulations, sir, for tainting yet another piece I once enjoyed. And I'll throw in a ********* here at the end for good measure.
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Feb 28, 2013
Feb 28, 2013 at 12:40 AM UTC
Because You Ruined Jupiter For Me
It's so trite. Premeditated and concise. Too much like something that you would like. Angular and rigid, tired and frigid. How is it that you can make something as beautiful as Mozart boring? When the strings should be raving, thrashing, roaring? Maybe it's just that particular recording. Either way, you've made it dull. You've made it a pain. I'd even go so far as to say you've made it annoying. So, congratulations, sir, for tainting yet another piece I once enjoyed. And I'll throw in a ********* here at the end for good measure.
Jupiter is a series of symphonies Mozart wrote.
alice-butler
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Feb 28, 2013
Feb 28, 2013 at 12:40 AM UTC
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