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this, when times stands still this, friends and laughs and music this, unendingly please, let time stand still please, we can’t let go of this please, we’ll miss it so now, can’t time stand still? now, when everything feels right now, with all of us?
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May 3, 2010
May 3, 2010 at 7:34 PM UTC
haikus make me miserable.
this, when times stands still this, friends and laughs and music this, unendingly please, let time stand still please, we can’t let go of this please, we’ll miss it so now, can’t time stand still? now, when everything feels right now, with all of us?
i like simple poem forms, so you'd think i'd like haikus. no. i don't. i don't like this set, either, but it's written and if i made it better i'd have to rewrite it, so. here they are. written in september of 2009.
sarah-wilson
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May 3, 2010
May 3, 2010 at 7:34 PM UTC
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