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youre bringing me down not to the tank floor where your image above seems distorted and oscillates between grim and precious but where you deflate me below where my ego floats me feet parallel third eye perpendicular like you and yours bringing me way down not below the bed (unless you like that kind of thing) where only the darkened image of your lowest extremities are in view only your most base visible but you enfeeble me beneath where my height normally is measured knees grinding clutching my claws into the ground down down down (man) not still, submerged within the earth where thistle and clover block my view of you your tears watering my marble marker but you pacify me buried beyond my anxieties placidity settling astride my bone to envelop my quintessence
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Feb 20, 2013
Feb 20, 2013 at 9:05 PM UTC
Bringing Me Down
youre bringing me down not to the tank floor where your image above seems distorted and oscillates between grim and precious but where you deflate me below where my ego floats me feet parallel third eye perpendicular like you and yours bringing me way down not below the bed (unless you like that kind of thing) where only the darkened image of your lowest extremities are in view only your most base visible but you enfeeble me beneath where my height normally is measured knees grinding clutching my claws into the ground down down down (man) not still, submerged within the earth where thistle and clover block my view of you your tears watering my marble marker but you pacify me buried beyond my anxieties placidity settling astride my bone to envelop my quintessence
allan-jain-bonder
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Feb 20, 2013
Feb 20, 2013 at 9:05 PM UTC
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