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Dawn a constant drunk, waves modernity on, Nights in purple doze, while head in rags’ sat, Mind pats window pane, sky occupied, flat Hangs the figures that push plague, condensation Outside is hugged in damaged and breathless car park clots. Close the arriving scenes depress, far and close by, Screaming seagulls sing dreams scattered wide, Cuts the closing of now yesterday’s hope Soul-bruise rates sit low tonight. Danger plays path fields bedsheets house Graceful clock plays dropped fate in loft Echos hand by hand  between beams Downstairs door lock snapped atoms ring Floorboards creak quake trepidatious Eyelids meet strange death amusements Waiting gun hyped howls air tight Rail, tracks, interrupted delight.
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May 6, 2019
May 6, 2019 at 9:00 PM UTC
Rail, tracks, interupted delight
Dawn a constant drunk, waves modernity on, Nights in purple doze, while head in rags’ sat, Mind pats window pane, sky occupied, flat Hangs the figures that push plague, condensation Outside is hugged in damaged and breathless car park clots. Close the arriving scenes depress, far and close by, Screaming seagulls sing dreams scattered wide, Cuts the closing of now yesterday’s hope Soul-bruise rates sit low tonight. Danger plays path fields bedsheets house Graceful clock plays dropped fate in loft Echos hand by hand  between beams Downstairs door lock snapped atoms ring Floorboards creak quake trepidatious Eyelids meet strange death amusements Waiting gun hyped howls air tight Rail, tracks, interrupted delight.
Metrical rework of earlier poem
RJP
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19/M/Wales
May 6, 2019
May 6, 2019 at 9:00 PM UTC
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