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Love lurks in the shadows, a B&E pro, watching for an open window, an unlatched screen door, on the not yet hardened heart. If we’re not careful It sneaks in through a sly glance A smile, a nod, a giggle, a laugh Sometimes it hides like trojan horse in the inane argument the one that won’t stop, we won’t stop. it keeps churning back and forth, the everready bunny, Until we can’t breathe, have nothing left to say except for what we want to say. It’s a comedian, hiding in punchlines like a mowed yard and the trash cans waiting at the curb, Tax filings and balanced household budgets, a clean sink and a car tuned up, gassed up and ready for the morning dash. Love announces itself in a shout a why the hell’d you do that, shout Love’s a twisted trickster, hiding in puke Cold towels on a sweaty forehead Then the knitted cap Keeping that cold head warm Love gets all shy when things get noisy, The kid who won’t make eye contact So sit tight, sit quiet and listen It’s hard Try it sometime See what you think Let me know. Love’s never found in an open cellphone Swiping, swiping, no. Maybe a text, maybe, But not for long. Love’s demanding, impatient Pleeeze don’t give me that Let ‘em go and if they return Blah-blah ******** Absence makes the heart shrivel Love dies in loneliness Loneliness is to love Like water is to The Evil Queen in Wizard of Oz A few drops and it starts to die. When you find love, Feed it, feed it, feed it Let it rest and breathe Keep it safe, And never let it go, Never make it want to hide. Copyright © 2019 by Zane Safrit. All rights reserved.
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Apr 27, 2019
Apr 27, 2019 at 2:53 PM UTC
Love Hides in Funny Places
Love lurks in the shadows, a B&E pro, watching for an open window, an unlatched screen door, on the not yet hardened heart. If we’re not careful It sneaks in through a sly glance A smile, a nod, a giggle, a laugh Sometimes it hides like trojan horse in the inane argument the one that won’t stop, we won’t stop. it keeps churning back and forth, the everready bunny, Until we can’t breathe, have nothing left to say except for what we want to say. It’s a comedian, hiding in punchlines like a mowed yard and the trash cans waiting at the curb, Tax filings and balanced household budgets, a clean sink and a car tuned up, gassed up and ready for the morning dash. Love announces itself in a shout a why the hell’d you do that, shout Love’s a twisted trickster, hiding in puke Cold towels on a sweaty forehead Then the knitted cap Keeping that cold head warm Love gets all shy when things get noisy, The kid who won’t make eye contact So sit tight, sit quiet and listen It’s hard Try it sometime See what you think Let me know. Love’s never found in an open cellphone Swiping, swiping, no. Maybe a text, maybe, But not for long. Love’s demanding, impatient Pleeeze don’t give me that Let ‘em go and if they return Blah-blah ******** Absence makes the heart shrivel Love dies in loneliness Loneliness is to love Like water is to The Evil Queen in Wizard of Oz A few drops and it starts to die. When you find love, Feed it, feed it, feed it Let it rest and breathe Keep it safe, And never let it go, Never make it want to hide. Copyright © 2019 by Zane Safrit. All rights reserved.
I started reading Charles Bukowski. With that inspiration I started writing this poem a few days ago. But I'm not Charles, and allowing time for this poem to sit a little, listening to what worked and what felt right, here it is. Hope you enjoy.
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Apr 27, 2019
Apr 27, 2019 at 2:53 PM UTC
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