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Honestly, I loved you from the moment that we met You were everything that I had been wanting but I just didn’t know it yet Shared vague ideas about your store and I  initially wondered if it could be a success Made very good use of my business card and boy, did you make me laugh After listening to all of your messages, I realized you were on the right track It was the perfect partnership in the making and I cut you some more slack You have the aesthetic vision and I have the good management sense We really compliment each other and my feelings are growing intense I’ve never quite met anyone like you before Let’s celebrate your birthday together and begin to explore What’s possible when we spend more time together outside the store Wait . . . Did you know way back then after our very first kiss That we would find in each other everything that we had wished And that I’d be here in front of the love of my life today getting down on one knee Or that you would be crying and saying yes, that you want to marry me
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Apr 4, 2019
Apr 4, 2019 at 10:23 AM UTC
David
Honestly, I loved you from the moment that we met You were everything that I had been wanting but I just didn’t know it yet Shared vague ideas about your store and I  initially wondered if it could be a success Made very good use of my business card and boy, did you make me laugh After listening to all of your messages, I realized you were on the right track It was the perfect partnership in the making and I cut you some more slack You have the aesthetic vision and I have the good management sense We really compliment each other and my feelings are growing intense I’ve never quite met anyone like you before Let’s celebrate your birthday together and begin to explore What’s possible when we spend more time together outside the store Wait . . . Did you know way back then after our very first kiss That we would find in each other everything that we had wished And that I’d be here in front of the love of my life today getting down on one knee Or that you would be crying and saying yes, that you want to marry me
Poem inspired by the progression of David and Patrick’s relationship on the TV show Schitt’s Creek.
djbrewer
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Michigan
Apr 4, 2019
Apr 4, 2019 at 10:23 AM UTC
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