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We're very much alike. Poetry is our inspiration, we were born writers. People call us BBQ sauce snobs wine connoisseurs and brothers. But he likes to dance at night-- in the headlights when the air pierces the skin. His deep dark pockets are an oblivion of cigarettes and full minis of Jack. Remind's me of Harpo. He walks like a snake slithers-- body swaying and a gleaming mischievous twinkle in his eye. We both enjoy crisp, autumn days, but he prefers them cloudy-- dark. He says it brings out the color in the reds and orange leaves jumping off the trees to twist in the breeze. Listening to stand-up is our solace, though he says Hicks is god. I say Carlin His shadow reminds me of a demon-- the long lost son of Medusa.   He's not afraid to say what he thinks, cause he knows he's right. Sometimes I believe him-- he speaks with such nonchalant confidence. There's always a needle on his words swiftly flitting and flickering like a flame he's flicking off his tongue. And if his words hurt breaking the skin? "Don't be such a ***** he'll snarl before turning the charm back on with a giggle and ironic wink. He likes to collect the faults in others cause his thinks his **** don't stink. He keeps reminding me of mine. He enjoys needling people. We've known each other for a long while. Seems like longer.... but that's cause my roommate is me.
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Feb 11, 2013
Feb 11, 2013 at 8:08 PM UTC
My Roommate (pt. 1)
We're very much alike. Poetry is our inspiration, we were born writers. People call us BBQ sauce snobs wine connoisseurs and brothers. But he likes to dance at night-- in the headlights when the air pierces the skin. His deep dark pockets are an oblivion of cigarettes and full minis of Jack. Remind's me of Harpo. He walks like a snake slithers-- body swaying and a gleaming mischievous twinkle in his eye. We both enjoy crisp, autumn days, but he prefers them cloudy-- dark. He says it brings out the color in the reds and orange leaves jumping off the trees to twist in the breeze. Listening to stand-up is our solace, though he says Hicks is god. I say Carlin His shadow reminds me of a demon-- the long lost son of Medusa.   He's not afraid to say what he thinks, cause he knows he's right. Sometimes I believe him-- he speaks with such nonchalant confidence. There's always a needle on his words swiftly flitting and flickering like a flame he's flicking off his tongue. And if his words hurt breaking the skin? "Don't be such a ***** he'll snarl before turning the charm back on with a giggle and ironic wink. He likes to collect the faults in others cause his thinks his **** don't stink. He keeps reminding me of mine. He enjoys needling people. We've known each other for a long while. Seems like longer.... but that's cause my roommate is me.
It's preferable to read the poem with this song in the background... http://youtu.be/F29Ky5ncefQ "You Rascal You" by Hanni El Khatib
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Feb 11, 2013
Feb 11, 2013 at 8:08 PM UTC
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