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I briefly stood outside her shelter until I heard her gentle voice speak to me, inviting me to come inside. For me it was a simple yet cautious request, seeing as how we had never met. I put forth my trust in her and slowly parted the silken drapes as I entered. “What is it you seek?” she asked. “I was told to appear here.” “Who sent you?” Hesitantly I replied, “I did.” Her lips formed into a cunning smirk, indicating her willingness to offer me a temporary sanctuary. I told her that I was on a vision quest. She smiled and replied, “Well then, let this be the first of countless enlightened moments for your mind, body, and spirit. Let me guide you into a fleeting realm of pure bliss. Do not be scared, my dear. Close your eyes, and grant yourself total freedom.” I scaled the highest, steepest peaks only to lean over and fall into the bluest of seas, tasting the salt my body unknowingly craved for. I further descended into the sweltering valleys, ceaselessly chasing the echoing screams of Aphrodite. I swiftly shot white, porcelain arrows into the rhythmic, beating sun, causing it to explode and pull me forward into the world I had momentarily withdrew from. I lethargically parted the silken drapes and ventured off. I would soon return.
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Feb 10, 2013
Feb 10, 2013 at 6:23 PM UTC
Temporary Sanctuary
I briefly stood outside her shelter until I heard her gentle voice speak to me, inviting me to come inside. For me it was a simple yet cautious request, seeing as how we had never met. I put forth my trust in her and slowly parted the silken drapes as I entered. “What is it you seek?” she asked. “I was told to appear here.” “Who sent you?” Hesitantly I replied, “I did.” Her lips formed into a cunning smirk, indicating her willingness to offer me a temporary sanctuary. I told her that I was on a vision quest. She smiled and replied, “Well then, let this be the first of countless enlightened moments for your mind, body, and spirit. Let me guide you into a fleeting realm of pure bliss. Do not be scared, my dear. Close your eyes, and grant yourself total freedom.” I scaled the highest, steepest peaks only to lean over and fall into the bluest of seas, tasting the salt my body unknowingly craved for. I further descended into the sweltering valleys, ceaselessly chasing the echoing screams of Aphrodite. I swiftly shot white, porcelain arrows into the rhythmic, beating sun, causing it to explode and pull me forward into the world I had momentarily withdrew from. I lethargically parted the silken drapes and ventured off. I would soon return.
donny-edward-klein
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Feb 10, 2013
Feb 10, 2013 at 6:23 PM UTC
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