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Standing there, on the cold, damp sand in the open air. Hearing the gush of the waves Crash against the rocks and roll onto the shore -Gently kissing your feet. The Coldness is overpowered by the emotions and relief within. The light finally begins to rise, The skies grow a blissful blue- in contrast to the regular, deeply darkened grey; mirroring the colour within your mind. Feeling your hair ****** forward along with the black crow- The long residing and awaiting crow. The final release, Resulting in the return of light, tranquility, and peace. The final release of this Dead Weight -constantly on your shoulder, Weighing down on your chest, and fluttering throughout your mind. --- The final release freeing you from this Godawful, hell of a disease.
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Mar 29, 2019
Mar 29, 2019 at 6:07 PM UTC
The Final Release
Standing there, on the cold, damp sand in the open air. Hearing the gush of the waves Crash against the rocks and roll onto the shore -Gently kissing your feet. The Coldness is overpowered by the emotions and relief within. The light finally begins to rise, The skies grow a blissful blue- in contrast to the regular, deeply darkened grey; mirroring the colour within your mind. Feeling your hair ****** forward along with the black crow- The long residing and awaiting crow. The final release, Resulting in the return of light, tranquility, and peace. The final release of this Dead Weight -constantly on your shoulder, Weighing down on your chest, and fluttering throughout your mind. --- The final release freeing you from this Godawful, hell of a disease.
MattersOfTheMind
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22/F/Amsterdam, Netherlands
Mar 29, 2019
Mar 29, 2019 at 6:07 PM UTC
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