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She opens and closes her eyes She smiles and says I’m fine. Do you know that’s a lie? When she cries she doesn’t tell you You get mad at her for small stuff and it breaks her heart through and through. Did you notice her tears…? No? She wants to tell you But it kills her to make you worry So she shuts up and pretends ……did you notice the mistakes……… ……no well then let me fix them…… He opens and closes his eyes. He smiles and says I’m fine. Do you know that’s a lie? When he cries he doesn’t tell you You get mad at him for small stuff and it breaks his heart through and through. Did you notice his tears…? No? he wants to tell you But it kills him to make you worry So he shuts up and pretends                                          -chyanne (kyle) sligo
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Mar 27, 2019
Mar 27, 2019 at 5:15 PM UTC
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She opens and closes her eyes She smiles and says I’m fine. Do you know that’s a lie? When she cries she doesn’t tell you You get mad at her for small stuff and it breaks her heart through and through. Did you notice her tears…? No? She wants to tell you But it kills her to make you worry So she shuts up and pretends ……did you notice the mistakes……… ……no well then let me fix them…… He opens and closes his eyes. He smiles and says I’m fine. Do you know that’s a lie? When he cries he doesn’t tell you You get mad at him for small stuff and it breaks his heart through and through. Did you notice his tears…? No? he wants to tell you But it kills him to make you worry So he shuts up and pretends                                          -chyanne (kyle) sligo
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Mar 27, 2019
Mar 27, 2019 at 5:15 PM UTC
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