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Shallow: a desert puddle, arid June Voracious need for lavish fortune Pseudo socialite, sprayed on tan Would die in a minivan Black Benz, hairdo, I, beep Drowning in the deep Judged by your frown Risible You will Drown
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Feb 9, 2013
Feb 9, 2013 at 8:36 PM UTC
Shallow (Rhymed Tenet)
Shallow: a desert puddle, arid June Voracious need for lavish fortune Pseudo socialite, sprayed on tan Would die in a minivan Black Benz, hairdo, I, beep Drowning in the deep Judged by your frown Risible You will Drown
Tenet is not a thing! I just wanted to add a line to a Nonet. This was inspired by Rebcca who is the deepest ocean on the planet!
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Feb 9, 2013
Feb 9, 2013 at 8:36 PM UTC
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