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The Raven flew along. As i tossed in my sleep. Whispers wove around my mind. The souls and demons meet. I was walking some place. I know it, but again I dont recognize. I saw the moon but i didnt. I saw everything with different eyes. The season changed before me. As i settled down to sleep. A cool wind carressed me. I prayed my soul to keep. A sudden fear awoke me. No other feeling compared. I saw her lay upon me. Her naked body white and bare. She looked to be an angel. And her long black hair in a bow. The contrast so sharp in my mind. Black petals in the white snow. She opened her eyes. And said a simple run. I felt a sudden rush of light. But this journey had yet begun. This is a throw back but I wrote two more sonnets to match the first two so let me know what you think of them.
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Feb 7, 2013
Feb 7, 2013 at 7:35 PM UTC
The Journey of the Black Petals on the White Snow.
The Raven flew along. As i tossed in my sleep. Whispers wove around my mind. The souls and demons meet. I was walking some place. I know it, but again I dont recognize. I saw the moon but i didnt. I saw everything with different eyes. The season changed before me. As i settled down to sleep. A cool wind carressed me. I prayed my soul to keep. A sudden fear awoke me. No other feeling compared. I saw her lay upon me. Her naked body white and bare. She looked to be an angel. And her long black hair in a bow. The contrast so sharp in my mind. Black petals in the white snow. She opened her eyes. And said a simple run. I felt a sudden rush of light. But this journey had yet begun. This is a throw back but I wrote two more sonnets to match the first two so let me know what you think of them.
Number one of a story told in 4 sonnets.
sydney-rianne-bouldin
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Feb 7, 2013
Feb 7, 2013 at 7:35 PM UTC
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