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Takes ages to get there, Hours in the car You wonder what all the fuss is Going so far.   But ​just look at the sea ​and then across the sea to an almost ring of mountains you will one day be able to name, one by one, ​they’ll trip off your tongue ​as they do off your mother's ​who’s been coming here ​since I don’t when,   and that’s ​maybe why ​it feels so good, ​it's in your blood,   the air so clean and fresh, the sea so cold but clear, ok, there are midges, and it might rain a lot, and you definitely won’t see any otters . . .   But this can be a place of miracles!   If the wind is right – no midges. If you sit still long enough – an otter appears. If you’re really lucky – it won’t rain (too much).   I know. I’ve been there too, And lost my heart to it all. Just like you.
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Feb 6, 2013
Feb 6, 2013 at 1:55 AM UTC
Mellon Udrigle
Takes ages to get there, Hours in the car You wonder what all the fuss is Going so far.   But ​just look at the sea ​and then across the sea to an almost ring of mountains you will one day be able to name, one by one, ​they’ll trip off your tongue ​as they do off your mother's ​who’s been coming here ​since I don’t when,   and that’s ​maybe why ​it feels so good, ​it's in your blood,   the air so clean and fresh, the sea so cold but clear, ok, there are midges, and it might rain a lot, and you definitely won’t see any otters . . .   But this can be a place of miracles!   If the wind is right – no midges. If you sit still long enough – an otter appears. If you’re really lucky – it won’t rain (too much).   I know. I’ve been there too, And lost my heart to it all. Just like you.
Mellon Udrigle is in the North West Highlands of Scotland. This is a poem from my collection Twelve - twelve birthday poems for a twelve year old.
nigel-morgan
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Feb 6, 2013
Feb 6, 2013 at 1:55 AM UTC
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