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It was Friday morn, and the sky was still as dark as charcoal. The coach drove on through the peaceful County of Carlow, with sleeping passengers as quiet as door mice. As the clearing of the morning darkness began, the bedraggled boy awoke from his slumber, perplexed and bewildered. It was in this moment his journey took a delightful twist; as the skies from outside turned a pale blood-red. It was a magical sight, he thought, as he rubbed his eyes just to be certain. But what a shame for the passengers as they continued to sleep, missing the rising spectacle. The boy, in awe and delight took witness to the beautiful gift, witnessing for the first time beautiful County Carlow, in all of its glory.
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Feb 23, 2019
Feb 23, 2019 at 5:58 AM UTC
The Blood-Red Skies of County Carlow
It was Friday morn, and the sky was still as dark as charcoal. The coach drove on through the peaceful County of Carlow, with sleeping passengers as quiet as door mice. As the clearing of the morning darkness began, the bedraggled boy awoke from his slumber, perplexed and bewildered. It was in this moment his journey took a delightful twist; as the skies from outside turned a pale blood-red. It was a magical sight, he thought, as he rubbed his eyes just to be certain. But what a shame for the passengers as they continued to sleep, missing the rising spectacle. The boy, in awe and delight took witness to the beautiful gift, witnessing for the first time beautiful County Carlow, in all of its glory.
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27/M/Belfast
Feb 23, 2019
Feb 23, 2019 at 5:58 AM UTC
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