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Do you know what it’s like for me looking at a half empty bottle of wine? It is Like it is for a chain smoker who sees Cigarette butts on the ground That are only half smoked. It’s like when The alcoholic Sees the perfect tumbler with just the right amount of ice and with the pristine glass craftsmanship that makes that Satisfying “clink”ing sound Whenever it hits the side table or counter. I SUFFER When I see such a sight. And I wouldn’t call it Addiction As much as I call it Jealousy. For me, it’s torture Realizing That people buy the bottle To get drunk Or to have fun Rather than To forget Like I do.
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Jan 29, 2013
Jan 29, 2013 at 5:45 PM UTC
There’s still Wine in that bottle.
Do you know what it’s like for me looking at a half empty bottle of wine? It is Like it is for a chain smoker who sees Cigarette butts on the ground That are only half smoked. It’s like when The alcoholic Sees the perfect tumbler with just the right amount of ice and with the pristine glass craftsmanship that makes that Satisfying “clink”ing sound Whenever it hits the side table or counter. I SUFFER When I see such a sight. And I wouldn’t call it Addiction As much as I call it Jealousy. For me, it’s torture Realizing That people buy the bottle To get drunk Or to have fun Rather than To forget Like I do.
I'm not an alcoholic and this piece is not to make light of addiction. In fact, it's attempting to be perspective for how addiction builds. Hope you enjoy.
ecpollick
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Jan 29, 2013
Jan 29, 2013 at 5:45 PM UTC
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