"oh my god that ***
the end of my lucid haiku
a poor sum, of how I like you
to rhyme, is more fun
for some time, i umm, on what, to jot
Creative Writing
plotting cotton
verse of love
caught on words...
Flattery is not worth enough
I, shall scatter thoughts
natter my anatomy
a man, of weaning battery
I plummet
dumbfounded
succumb, to the comfort I fear
so bound, by delight
I hum, to an unfamiliar, profound, dynamite wonder.
I Pride
Unencumbered
Untied
Unbenumbed eyes
I spy recent peace of mind
I
Feel
Joy.
This piece of mine
Me, V and the boy
Feb 13, 2019
Feb 13, 2019 at 4:23 PM UTC
"oh my god that ***
the end of my lucid haiku
a poor sum, of how I like you
to rhyme, is more fun
for some time, i umm, on what, to jot
Creative Writing
plotting cotton
verse of love
caught on words...
Flattery is not worth enough
I, shall scatter thoughts
natter my anatomy
a man, of weaning battery
I plummet
dumbfounded
succumb, to the comfort I fear
so bound, by delight
I hum, to an unfamiliar, profound, dynamite wonder.
I Pride
Unencumbered
Untied
Unbenumbed eyes
I spy recent peace of mind
I
Feel
Joy.
This piece of mine
Me, V and the boy
A little explanation. This was written for my girlfriend. I woke up from a dream in which I had written a haiku about her but all I could remember is it ended in "Oh my god that *** She loves poems so I thought I'd try and write a proper one but I have not written before so please let me know what you think. :)