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I’m bored I’m bored Im bored I’m bored Help me Pressures Weighing Heavy All the Cliches Traditions Expectations Bearing down, Bearing down, Down Down Down Do this! Do that! Think this! Think that! Ugh! I’m so tired Of all you people Dictating my life Just let Please let Me be Me And still: After all Of that Deep thinking I’m Still Bored.
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Feb 6, 2019
Feb 6, 2019 at 5:53 PM UTC
Bored Take 2
I’m bored I’m bored Im bored I’m bored Help me Pressures Weighing Heavy All the Cliches Traditions Expectations Bearing down, Bearing down, Down Down Down Do this! Do that! Think this! Think that! Ugh! I’m so tired Of all you people Dictating my life Just let Please let Me be Me And still: After all Of that Deep thinking I’m Still Bored.
I got a lot of great suggestions from people on my other bored poem and rewrote it like this! I wanted to keep my other poem though, so this is the result: a new poem. Still very open to feedback though, as I would like more opinions.
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Feb 6, 2019
Feb 6, 2019 at 5:53 PM UTC
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