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Another three a.m. from too many smiles and aching again to see the green lakes in your eyes sparkle like white wine and longing to hear another word sing from your lips because your voice is like water, and another just-fifteen-minutes-more so that I can find the right words to say and another sincere I-know-what-you-mean and another one of your thoughts kissing the ends of my sentences, and then three more of your I-gotta-go-to-beds and another shot at keeping you here and one last goodnight and I'm so far away and I love you. Another three a.m., and it's more than just the miles keeping us apart.
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Jan 25, 2013
Jan 25, 2013 at 9:27 PM UTC
You Keep Me Up More Than I, You
Another three a.m. from too many smiles and aching again to see the green lakes in your eyes sparkle like white wine and longing to hear another word sing from your lips because your voice is like water, and another just-fifteen-minutes-more so that I can find the right words to say and another sincere I-know-what-you-mean and another one of your thoughts kissing the ends of my sentences, and then three more of your I-gotta-go-to-beds and another shot at keeping you here and one last goodnight and I'm so far away and I love you. Another three a.m., and it's more than just the miles keeping us apart.
This poem, in particular, really needs to be read aloud. The pacing is very important. Do not pause at line breaks; pause only at punctuation marks.
john-eustace-needham
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Jan 25, 2013
Jan 25, 2013 at 9:27 PM UTC
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