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O' elder Oak, how thou growest so old? What ancient yarns thou could spin from each limb. Wars, drought, what visions thine gray bark doth hold. Ole Pennsylvanian wood, were thou sewn by him Whose king's debt owed, founded this sovereign land. Thine story hath gravid weight, not a tale told grim. As a youth, thou were a knight's castle grand Or a dark dragon with fiery breath. High in thee boughs, thy mastered the farmland. As years passed and our kinship reached its breadth, Thy cannot help but to lament the time That thou spied on thy joyous play. Now thy death Looms long. To Heaven thine branches doth climb.
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Jan 24, 2013
Jan 24, 2013 at 9:29 PM UTC
Childhood Oak (Terza rima)
O' elder Oak, how thou growest so old? What ancient yarns thou could spin from each limb. Wars, drought, what visions thine gray bark doth hold. Ole Pennsylvanian wood, were thou sewn by him Whose king's debt owed, founded this sovereign land. Thine story hath gravid weight, not a tale told grim. As a youth, thou were a knight's castle grand Or a dark dragon with fiery breath. High in thee boughs, thy mastered the farmland. As years passed and our kinship reached its breadth, Thy cannot help but to lament the time That thou spied on thy joyous play. Now thy death Looms long. To Heaven thine branches doth climb.
This is my first Terza rima. I chose to write about an ole friend in an ole form of English.  Thanks for reading. Please give constructive criticism.
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Jan 24, 2013
Jan 24, 2013 at 9:29 PM UTC
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