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The snow fell heavily and laid a white blanket over everything from the top of the plum trees to the ground of the garden. There was no school as the school bus couldn’t get through the narrow lanes high in snow fall. You knew you’d not see Jane that day which was a shame as you wanted to tell her about the bullfinch you had seen down the lane by the small stream. You looked out of your bedroom window; your siblings were outside in their boots, wrapped up warm playing in the snow, laughing. You wondered what Jane was doing; was she looking out at it like you, or if she was outside doing things. The farm workers had to cross the deep snow to the farm to milk the cows. You decided to offer your help to get the cows in and help weigh the milk, rather than standing looking out getting bored. On the other side of the hamlet, Jane was helping her father clear snow from the pathway to the house to the church. She was wrapped up in coat and scarf and gloves and was getting quite warm. She mused on you, wondering what you were doing, wishing she could have met you, but the road was too deep to walk to your parents’ cottage. She shovelled away snow to the sides of the path; her father was at the other end by the church shovelling away snow at that end. You crossed the field in your knee-high boots, following the footsteps made by the farm workers, and into the farm and dairy. They let you help them get the cows into the milking-shed and weigh the milk on the huge scales in the buckets they gave you for each cow and you wrote it down on the list. Jane stood for a few moments getting her breath, listening to the sound of the rooks in the high trees. She wished you could be there beside her, holding her hand, your fingers between hers. She still felt your kiss on the cheek you gave her last week.
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Feb 2, 2019
Feb 2, 2019 at 4:41 AM UTC
Snowy Friday 1961
The snow fell heavily and laid a white blanket over everything from the top of the plum trees to the ground of the garden. There was no school as the school bus couldn’t get through the narrow lanes high in snow fall. You knew you’d not see Jane that day which was a shame as you wanted to tell her about the bullfinch you had seen down the lane by the small stream. You looked out of your bedroom window; your siblings were outside in their boots, wrapped up warm playing in the snow, laughing. You wondered what Jane was doing; was she looking out at it like you, or if she was outside doing things. The farm workers had to cross the deep snow to the farm to milk the cows. You decided to offer your help to get the cows in and help weigh the milk, rather than standing looking out getting bored. On the other side of the hamlet, Jane was helping her father clear snow from the pathway to the house to the church. She was wrapped up in coat and scarf and gloves and was getting quite warm. She mused on you, wondering what you were doing, wishing she could have met you, but the road was too deep to walk to your parents’ cottage. She shovelled away snow to the sides of the path; her father was at the other end by the church shovelling away snow at that end. You crossed the field in your knee-high boots, following the footsteps made by the farm workers, and into the farm and dairy. They let you help them get the cows into the milking-shed and weigh the milk on the huge scales in the buckets they gave you for each cow and you wrote it down on the list. Jane stood for a few moments getting her breath, listening to the sound of the rooks in the high trees. She wished you could be there beside her, holding her hand, your fingers between hers. She still felt your kiss on the cheek you gave her last week.
A boy and girl in the countryside in 1961
TerryCollett
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Feb 2, 2019
Feb 2, 2019 at 4:41 AM UTC
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