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woke up old with cold bones creaking, bright knives cut through shuttered blinds; gasped and breathed, remembered, rose and crept out from the dark to find a bag sat packed; the words came back: "Come see me then, if you're alive." the mist hung down from cloud and sky; a sun sat brave but weak and low; the trees so straight and tall remembered summers young and long ago. the engine spat and growled and every tread declared its vigour still, and soon the trees, the sun and mist were lost behind the valley hill. on i sailed through burning winds and grey and smokey white-lined seas. i thought of all i'd say and all you'd ask and what the past would mean, and all those summer times we climbed and hid among the valley trees.
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Jan 23, 2013
Jan 23, 2013 at 9:23 PM UTC
Out From the Valley
woke up old with cold bones creaking, bright knives cut through shuttered blinds; gasped and breathed, remembered, rose and crept out from the dark to find a bag sat packed; the words came back: "Come see me then, if you're alive." the mist hung down from cloud and sky; a sun sat brave but weak and low; the trees so straight and tall remembered summers young and long ago. the engine spat and growled and every tread declared its vigour still, and soon the trees, the sun and mist were lost behind the valley hill. on i sailed through burning winds and grey and smokey white-lined seas. i thought of all i'd say and all you'd ask and what the past would mean, and all those summer times we climbed and hid among the valley trees.
23 July 2011
tenor-kemp
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42/M/Australian
Jan 23, 2013
Jan 23, 2013 at 9:23 PM UTC
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