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We began to write The thoughts that crossed The line that we had written in the sand The boundary they sold us on these lands. And we’ve become the old age rising Understanding word beyond the spoken What can compare to the things we see? It feels like the simplest summer breeze. Some shot bolt found our heart the target No point to stem the steed now bolted The inky reed quivers in every hand I've come across these beautiful lines That you have loved into this sand.
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Jan 28, 2019
Jan 28, 2019 at 9:44 AM UTC
LINES IN OUR SAND.
We began to write The thoughts that crossed The line that we had written in the sand The boundary they sold us on these lands. And we’ve become the old age rising Understanding word beyond the spoken What can compare to the things we see? It feels like the simplest summer breeze. Some shot bolt found our heart the target No point to stem the steed now bolted The inky reed quivers in every hand I've come across these beautiful lines That you have loved into this sand.
Expressing how writing together has helped us discover new and better places. It applies particularly to conflict zones, both physical and perceived. It is valuable to find the real reason for a fence, wall, or entrenched belief by encouraging written expressions of the hearts involved. Once ignited in us, the power of words take over.
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Jan 28, 2019
Jan 28, 2019 at 9:44 AM UTC
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