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A square, white, four bedroom, one bath country home With fourteen kids, parents and much family love We didn’t have abundance: fiscally poor But we had each other: banked on our family We shared our victories and or trying pain We were a modest Scottish Catholic Clan Isolated, we were not to our immediate clan Our uncle’s lived within a trot, fifteen in his home We kids worked and played on the farm without pain It was an adventurous labor of extended family love We worked, laughed, cried, and played as a family In the early years, we young ones were anything but poor However, in grammar school, we learned the meaning of poor And materialism and envy, outside our cloistered clan But together we lived and loved as a close nit family Sure we had disagreements, not material goods, but a solid home White paint peeled on the outside, yet inside was painted love Still, there were poverty jokes, ridicule and masked pain Every family has strife, baggage, and superfluous pain Our parents didn’t drink; we had faith, yet fiscally poor Ole Dad plumbed toilets; Mom slaved in the house, both with love So we wouldn’t trade riches for our impoverished meager clan Summer berries to pick, winter sledding, spring kites, and forever home Kickball games, splashing in ponds, nature hikes and family We were not taught to show emotions, hug, not an “I love you family,” Albeit, an honest, polite, and proud Scottish Clan The old house was eternally warm; it was our forever home Until 1999. Dad passed from cancer still money poor Yet rich in the knowledge of family and that his true pain Was never saying that word; on his deathbed he whispered “Love” Though our patriarch was laid to rest, we rose with the word “Love” Eventually, the house was sold, but always one huge family Mom spends her days in a retirement home remembering her clan As time passes and memories fades, it lessens the pain Of the loss of a noble father, economically poor Yet with a strong work ethic, church, and love, built a home Fourteen children now forged fourteen homes on love Many, still, financially poor, but rich in forever family Correcting mistakes that caused pain, while perpetuating our clan
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Jan 22, 2013
Jan 22, 2013 at 3:23 PM UTC
Forever Home (Sestina)
A square, white, four bedroom, one bath country home With fourteen kids, parents and much family love We didn’t have abundance: fiscally poor But we had each other: banked on our family We shared our victories and or trying pain We were a modest Scottish Catholic Clan Isolated, we were not to our immediate clan Our uncle’s lived within a trot, fifteen in his home We kids worked and played on the farm without pain It was an adventurous labor of extended family love We worked, laughed, cried, and played as a family In the early years, we young ones were anything but poor However, in grammar school, we learned the meaning of poor And materialism and envy, outside our cloistered clan But together we lived and loved as a close nit family Sure we had disagreements, not material goods, but a solid home White paint peeled on the outside, yet inside was painted love Still, there were poverty jokes, ridicule and masked pain Every family has strife, baggage, and superfluous pain Our parents didn’t drink; we had faith, yet fiscally poor Ole Dad plumbed toilets; Mom slaved in the house, both with love So we wouldn’t trade riches for our impoverished meager clan Summer berries to pick, winter sledding, spring kites, and forever home Kickball games, splashing in ponds, nature hikes and family We were not taught to show emotions, hug, not an “I love you family,” Albeit, an honest, polite, and proud Scottish Clan The old house was eternally warm; it was our forever home Until 1999. Dad passed from cancer still money poor Yet rich in the knowledge of family and that his true pain Was never saying that word; on his deathbed he whispered “Love” Though our patriarch was laid to rest, we rose with the word “Love” Eventually, the house was sold, but always one huge family Mom spends her days in a retirement home remembering her clan As time passes and memories fades, it lessens the pain Of the loss of a noble father, economically poor Yet with a strong work ethic, church, and love, built a home Fourteen children now forged fourteen homes on love Many, still, financially poor, but rich in forever family Correcting mistakes that caused pain, while perpetuating our clan
Thank you soooo much if you read this Sestina. It is a time-consuming form. I was definitely challenged. This is autobiographical yet set even further in the past. I used old references and a simple language to capture that old country feeling, like the Waltons, for those of you old enough to remember that show. Thanks again for reading this long Sestina. I hope you enjoyed it. It may be my last.
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Jan 22, 2013
Jan 22, 2013 at 3:23 PM UTC
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