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I hear bones twitch in the flower bed turning over their trembling groan to the deep soil with bitter solitude in some strange way. Autumn swirled her cracked wind that shook the willowed branches as I clung desperately to my rhythm in the wilderness blindly following the flicker of an empyreal garden that glowed along the path in a mysterious way. And me happiest, when the earth offers a place to sleep amongst the billows of the sky. Most beautiful as sunlight pours itself across my body, a reminder of simply being alive.
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Jan 20, 2013
Jan 20, 2013 at 11:05 PM UTC
Tomorrow I Will Wake
I hear bones twitch in the flower bed turning over their trembling groan to the deep soil with bitter solitude in some strange way. Autumn swirled her cracked wind that shook the willowed branches as I clung desperately to my rhythm in the wilderness blindly following the flicker of an empyreal garden that glowed along the path in a mysterious way. And me happiest, when the earth offers a place to sleep amongst the billows of the sky. Most beautiful as sunlight pours itself across my body, a reminder of simply being alive.
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kara-troglin
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Jan 20, 2013
Jan 20, 2013 at 11:05 PM UTC
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