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Your hair falls, like dark feathers over your forehead, too soft for lowly hands. Your eyes they live beneath, the hole you live in reflected there. I bend and shoulder another of your burdens. It is all I can do. You are trapped, like a prince in a dream. Or a nightmare. In my love for you, it feels as though tenderness will tear a hole through my heart. I would carry worlds.
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Jan 18, 2019
Jan 18, 2019 at 1:53 PM UTC
For You
Your hair falls, like dark feathers over your forehead, too soft for lowly hands. Your eyes they live beneath, the hole you live in reflected there. I bend and shoulder another of your burdens. It is all I can do. You are trapped, like a prince in a dream. Or a nightmare. In my love for you, it feels as though tenderness will tear a hole through my heart. I would carry worlds.
Almost a Haiku. In alternating 5-7-5 syllables.
Longnoideatime
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23/F/Your Mom’s
Jan 18, 2019
Jan 18, 2019 at 1:53 PM UTC
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