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a wisp of smoke curls up--heavenward until it disintegrates into nothingness a burnt tip-- alighted by an orange flame that flickers quick from a cheap Bic lighter the cigarette dangles tantalizingly between two fingers-- index and middle it's a balancing act-- to stay away from the ashes and to not drop your sustenance dark red lips slightly parted nearly purple, but not quite as if a speeding car halted at an invisible border the arbitrary line between purple and red she exhales the smoke coming out in elongated ohs once the smoke clears she is gone after all, she was a hazed out, high-defying, hallucinatory, dream
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Jan 14, 2019
Jan 14, 2019 at 2:47 AM UTC
hallucinations (the woman)
a wisp of smoke curls up--heavenward until it disintegrates into nothingness a burnt tip-- alighted by an orange flame that flickers quick from a cheap Bic lighter the cigarette dangles tantalizingly between two fingers-- index and middle it's a balancing act-- to stay away from the ashes and to not drop your sustenance dark red lips slightly parted nearly purple, but not quite as if a speeding car halted at an invisible border the arbitrary line between purple and red she exhales the smoke coming out in elongated ohs once the smoke clears she is gone after all, she was a hazed out, high-defying, hallucinatory, dream
i tried to capture the typical woman from a hard-boiled detective fiction/noir film, in someone's dream. think broadway's city of angels, for an example.
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Jan 14, 2019
Jan 14, 2019 at 2:47 AM UTC
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