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A hollow ‘hello’ from Hell! Yes, from Hell. Where do names come from? This Hell is a sleepy fishing village and the best spot that we’ve found on Hollow Head, a Sleepy Hollows, so to speak. We are in the ‘Bridegroom’, a little Bed and Breakfast, run by a Rip Van Winkle wise enough to know it was Empedocles who jumped into Mount Etna. Empedocles! Is my face red! Yet it will glorify my pronoun to perfection—‘he jumps’. Yes, both poetry and philosophy ought to have the same antecedent. They forge a world that’s capable of consciousness. The self, per se, remains vestigial— the voice of the volcano, not its source. Your pronoun is the antecedent, not your noun. Problematic resolved. Perhaps I will go for a walk in Hell, perhaps I will take the air, take the breezes. A wonderful day in Hell! Ha-ha!
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Apr 18, 2010
Apr 18, 2010 at 4:49 PM UTC
Postcards, Unsigned: The Third Card
A hollow ‘hello’ from Hell! Yes, from Hell. Where do names come from? This Hell is a sleepy fishing village and the best spot that we’ve found on Hollow Head, a Sleepy Hollows, so to speak. We are in the ‘Bridegroom’, a little Bed and Breakfast, run by a Rip Van Winkle wise enough to know it was Empedocles who jumped into Mount Etna. Empedocles! Is my face red! Yet it will glorify my pronoun to perfection—‘he jumps’. Yes, both poetry and philosophy ought to have the same antecedent. They forge a world that’s capable of consciousness. The self, per se, remains vestigial— the voice of the volcano, not its source. Your pronoun is the antecedent, not your noun. Problematic resolved. Perhaps I will go for a walk in Hell, perhaps I will take the air, take the breezes. A wonderful day in Hell! Ha-ha!
©Jim Kleinhenz
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Apr 18, 2010
Apr 18, 2010 at 4:49 PM UTC
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