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Eyes lock on to eyes, Tears ******* the solemn orbs; Breaths, ragged and harsh, Cough out, Awaiting that final Gasp for air. The comforting grip Of a friend's hand in hand. The smell of death, Now closing in. Eyes lose focus, blurring, And shut one final time. Farewell...
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Jan 15, 2013
Jan 15, 2013 at 2:28 PM UTC
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Eyes lock on to eyes, Tears ******* the solemn orbs; Breaths, ragged and harsh, Cough out, Awaiting that final Gasp for air. The comforting grip Of a friend's hand in hand. The smell of death, Now closing in. Eyes lose focus, blurring, And shut one final time. Farewell...
I had several friends and family members pass away this year. I wrote this with the emotions I felt after a good friend of mine passed, but the story is more of my grandmother's passing.
isaac-sands
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Jan 15, 2013
Jan 15, 2013 at 2:28 PM UTC
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