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i can feel your stare while you lean up against the pole of the noisy subway you've got battered up sneakers and slightly messy hair you're pretending to look at your phone as if it is more interesting than my face you'd like to be in my presence yet the driving force of the train stops you all together. the lady overhead announces your stop, and i look up at you once again you make me think that you'll stay for the next stop until you slip out of my sight at the last second before the doors close shut.
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Jan 4, 2019
Jan 4, 2019 at 2:01 PM UTC
hey there, stanger
i can feel your stare while you lean up against the pole of the noisy subway you've got battered up sneakers and slightly messy hair you're pretending to look at your phone as if it is more interesting than my face you'd like to be in my presence yet the driving force of the train stops you all together. the lady overhead announces your stop, and i look up at you once again you make me think that you'll stay for the next stop until you slip out of my sight at the last second before the doors close shut.
some guy was staring at me in the metro, i didn't find him all too attractive. but there was a lot more to him and i could sense it.
krasnovaki
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21/F/Greece
Jan 4, 2019
Jan 4, 2019 at 2:01 PM UTC
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