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shiver'd awake, no rain-guard on your tent. beautiful to see the stars when that drunk sends you spinning, but it got cold. real cold. the two of you went for cigarettes. necessary, after a blur'd night with raiding raccoons. piss'd the night before, piss'd the morning after; you were right hungover. while gone, i built the fire to cook. (that fire, that fire was my baby) rations were raid'd by wildlife in the night, left were a can of chili and some fritos. knifed the top off can, began breakfast. your return brought cigarettes, hair of the dog, excitement at the day beginning. mention'd dog hair, available only after raccoon raids and sinking cans. night prior we weren't as drunk as i think. i remember. i guess. it fix'd us up, though, as our immoderate breakfast hit home.
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Jan 13, 2013
Jan 13, 2013 at 7:48 AM UTC
memories. pt2
shiver'd awake, no rain-guard on your tent. beautiful to see the stars when that drunk sends you spinning, but it got cold. real cold. the two of you went for cigarettes. necessary, after a blur'd night with raiding raccoons. piss'd the night before, piss'd the morning after; you were right hungover. while gone, i built the fire to cook. (that fire, that fire was my baby) rations were raid'd by wildlife in the night, left were a can of chili and some fritos. knifed the top off can, began breakfast. your return brought cigarettes, hair of the dog, excitement at the day beginning. mention'd dog hair, available only after raccoon raids and sinking cans. night prior we weren't as drunk as i think. i remember. i guess. it fix'd us up, though, as our immoderate breakfast hit home.
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Jan 13, 2013
Jan 13, 2013 at 7:48 AM UTC
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