A four corner chamber
where hardship intrudes and
darkness seems to be endless
Years of agony and anguish
have make the souls numb
yet still too sensitive
The anxious ones silenced their mouth
while those lionhearted tried to oppose
but failed as success is hard to reach
Pessimism?
Many candles of aspirations and hopes
had flickered to its death
and the fires that are still luminous
are relying with prayers
They are all in place
but they don't know where they are heading
as the chamber changed the routes
to the paradise where they must be
The chamber separates their wisdom
and strangles their thoughts
to create mindless puppets
that forbids to move unless controlled
But don't worry,
as you can be free from here
moving to a wider chamber
where you will conquer "life"
a darker place full of inevitable trouble
Dec 27, 2018
Dec 27, 2018 at 7:47 AM UTC
A four corner chamber
where hardship intrudes and
darkness seems to be endless
Years of agony and anguish
have make the souls numb
yet still too sensitive
The anxious ones silenced their mouth
while those lionhearted tried to oppose
but failed as success is hard to reach
Pessimism?
Many candles of aspirations and hopes
had flickered to its death
and the fires that are still luminous
are relying with prayers
They are all in place
but they don't know where they are heading
as the chamber changed the routes
to the paradise where they must be
The chamber separates their wisdom
and strangles their thoughts
to create mindless puppets
that forbids to move unless controlled
But don't worry,
as you can be free from here
moving to a wider chamber
where you will conquer "life"
a darker place full of inevitable trouble
Being student is not that easy
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