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as i read the words you write, they feel like waves of emotions, dancing across the page, waves crashing into my shore, craving more to wash up onto my shore, it reaches deep into my core, pulling tears from my eyes, everything you write is so deep, like the oceans in which we lose ourselves, so continue to flow so freely, let your pen dance freely along the pages, equal to how you dance so freely in the mirror, for every word you write digs deeper and deeper into me.                                                         © Try
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Dec 14, 2018
Dec 14, 2018 at 1:23 PM UTC
The Dancer who is a Writer
as i read the words you write, they feel like waves of emotions, dancing across the page, waves crashing into my shore, craving more to wash up onto my shore, it reaches deep into my core, pulling tears from my eyes, everything you write is so deep, like the oceans in which we lose ourselves, so continue to flow so freely, let your pen dance freely along the pages, equal to how you dance so freely in the mirror, for every word you write digs deeper and deeper into me.                                                         © Try
I've been reading some one who is new here, writings and i have been quite moved so this writing is a shout out to them, the Writer i am talking about is Jessica Stull. her writings are very moving, you can honestly feel very emotion she is portraying in her writings, every line feels like a new wave crashing into you, yet the way she writes its like shes dancing on the page it self.
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26/M/Astral Plain
Dec 14, 2018
Dec 14, 2018 at 1:23 PM UTC
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