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Granddad had a front room full of treasures to your child’s eyes from paintings of Madonnas or other holies to bowls of fruit filling the room with that applely smell and vases of all colours and shapes and only opened up when Gran opened the door on the way through to the lounge where your granddad sat or when you managed to steal a moment alone while the elders where busy you opened the door and gazed around the room like an Aladdin’s cave the statues of spaniel dogs or wiry cats your ears listening for the voices of the others from the lower part of the house waiting in the doorway your eyes wide taking it all in right down to the smell of fruit that filled the room the half light the dark shade where another world seemed to begin or end until on hearing your parent’s voice or Granddad’s call echoing along the hall.
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Jan 8, 2013
Jan 8, 2013 at 11:30 AM UTC
GRANDDAD'S ROOM OF TREASURES.
Granddad had a front room full of treasures to your child’s eyes from paintings of Madonnas or other holies to bowls of fruit filling the room with that applely smell and vases of all colours and shapes and only opened up when Gran opened the door on the way through to the lounge where your granddad sat or when you managed to steal a moment alone while the elders where busy you opened the door and gazed around the room like an Aladdin’s cave the statues of spaniel dogs or wiry cats your ears listening for the voices of the others from the lower part of the house waiting in the doorway your eyes wide taking it all in right down to the smell of fruit that filled the room the half light the dark shade where another world seemed to begin or end until on hearing your parent’s voice or Granddad’s call echoing along the hall.
terry-collett
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Jan 8, 2013
Jan 8, 2013 at 11:30 AM UTC
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