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How is the night treating you? I am asleep, but not. Half awake, but not. I am hope, but not. I want to scream, but don't. In this half-morning, I want yesterday, but don't. Tomorrow has poured in, but hasn't. Now these itchy feet. Itchy tips of hair that rub the cheeks. Itchy heart where love smoulders. Some sweeter itch: but, itch, nevertheless; itch in my sleep. I want to know if this is an itchy night? The rain falls like an itch on the rooftop. This is some funny farce of a farcical night. Tonight, I love the teals more, but don't. Coots seem darker than the sky, but aren't. In this deep night, I am love, but not. In this last 'but not', the 'not' part is small, I mean.
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Jan 6, 2013
Jan 6, 2013 at 12:32 PM UTC
Itchy night
How is the night treating you? I am asleep, but not. Half awake, but not. I am hope, but not. I want to scream, but don't. In this half-morning, I want yesterday, but don't. Tomorrow has poured in, but hasn't. Now these itchy feet. Itchy tips of hair that rub the cheeks. Itchy heart where love smoulders. Some sweeter itch: but, itch, nevertheless; itch in my sleep. I want to know if this is an itchy night? The rain falls like an itch on the rooftop. This is some funny farce of a farcical night. Tonight, I love the teals more, but don't. Coots seem darker than the sky, but aren't. In this deep night, I am love, but not. In this last 'but not', the 'not' part is small, I mean.
Some quirky notes exchanged on an itchy night - am sure you've felt this same way some time or the other!
prabhu-iyer
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Jan 6, 2013
Jan 6, 2013 at 12:32 PM UTC
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