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These feelings lay dormant I see her with another My rage grows As their bodies quiver I sit here in wait My time to pursue It is blocked; broken The hands won't move The ticking slows It stops My heart beats It erupts The last breath I take I move forward I awake Eye to eye We meet For an instance We weep Then the light Fades to black I hold her close As her breathtaking eyes turn back ...
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Jan 4, 2013
Jan 4, 2013 at 3:35 AM UTC
Breathtaking
These feelings lay dormant I see her with another My rage grows As their bodies quiver I sit here in wait My time to pursue It is blocked; broken The hands won't move The ticking slows It stops My heart beats It erupts The last breath I take I move forward I awake Eye to eye We meet For an instance We weep Then the light Fades to black I hold her close As her breathtaking eyes turn back ...
jordan-farelli
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Jan 4, 2013
Jan 4, 2013 at 3:35 AM UTC
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