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“12 Hours” 12 hours along in my head 12 hours with endless waves of dread 12 hours waiting to hear you speak 12 hours of happiness, I wish I could seek 12 hours reliving every moment with you 12 hours of seeing the moment you’ll say ‘I Do’ 12 hours of wondering if I could take away the pain 12 hours more of being stuck in a cloud of rain 12 hours of heartache, my chest so tight 12 hours of counting the days until I am in your sight 12 hours of thankful of the love you give to me 12 hours without you feels like an eternity
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Apr 12, 2010
Apr 12, 2010 at 11:22 AM UTC
"12 Hours"
“12 Hours” 12 hours along in my head 12 hours with endless waves of dread 12 hours waiting to hear you speak 12 hours of happiness, I wish I could seek 12 hours reliving every moment with you 12 hours of seeing the moment you’ll say ‘I Do’ 12 hours of wondering if I could take away the pain 12 hours more of being stuck in a cloud of rain 12 hours of heartache, my chest so tight 12 hours of counting the days until I am in your sight 12 hours of thankful of the love you give to me 12 hours without you feels like an eternity
This was something that I wrote while serving in Iraq and being away from the woman I love. Its about being away from her during this tour
brian-gallagher
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42/M/American
Apr 12, 2010
Apr 12, 2010 at 11:22 AM UTC
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