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there is little substance in affinity marked by proximity. it is no true measure of commitment or loyalty but merely a constant exchange of fabricated facades. such is the folly of friendship. whether nature ever actually achieved compassion, it has surely since been corrupted. emotionally encapsulated, acting as if not to affect those in the evading environment. selfish must have proven more efficient than selfless. the superiority of self priority and depraved self devotion. still it doesn't seem sufficient, at least not to me.
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Apr 12, 2010
Apr 12, 2010 at 5:35 AM UTC
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there is little substance in affinity marked by proximity. it is no true measure of commitment or loyalty but merely a constant exchange of fabricated facades. such is the folly of friendship. whether nature ever actually achieved compassion, it has surely since been corrupted. emotionally encapsulated, acting as if not to affect those in the evading environment. selfish must have proven more efficient than selfless. the superiority of self priority and depraved self devotion. still it doesn't seem sufficient, at least not to me.
© Amir Mirro 2008
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Apr 12, 2010
Apr 12, 2010 at 5:35 AM UTC
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