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Edna drew the curtains on the night sky; Nellie was already in bed, watching. Did you undress without drawing the curtains? Edna said. It was in the dark; I didn't light the candle until after. The candle flickered in the candle holder. Shame about the old dear; do think she'll cope now the old buzzard is dead? Edna said. Her daughter said she will, Nellie said, watching as the maid began to undress. **** wasn't so sure; she reckons she'll peg out next, Edna said. What does old **** know; she's just the cook, Nellie replied. She studied Edna wash quickly in her underclothes. ****** cold, Edna said. Come to bed then, said Nellie, and I'll warm you. Edna dried herself quickly; then put on her old nightgown. Poor old dear, Edna said quietly. She climbed into the old bed and pulled the blankets over them. Nellie blew out the candle and the room in the attic was swollwed by darkness, except for a slither of moonlight which pushed through the parting where the curtains didn't meet. Edna giggled. Quiet, Nellie whispered. Well don't touch me there, Edna replied. Where? Nellie said. Edna giggled again: There, she muttered. Outside it began to rain.
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Nov 15, 2018
Nov 15, 2018 at 4:01 PM UTC
Maids at Bedtime 1924.
Edna drew the curtains on the night sky; Nellie was already in bed, watching. Did you undress without drawing the curtains? Edna said. It was in the dark; I didn't light the candle until after. The candle flickered in the candle holder. Shame about the old dear; do think she'll cope now the old buzzard is dead? Edna said. Her daughter said she will, Nellie said, watching as the maid began to undress. **** wasn't so sure; she reckons she'll peg out next, Edna said. What does old **** know; she's just the cook, Nellie replied. She studied Edna wash quickly in her underclothes. ****** cold, Edna said. Come to bed then, said Nellie, and I'll warm you. Edna dried herself quickly; then put on her old nightgown. Poor old dear, Edna said quietly. She climbed into the old bed and pulled the blankets over them. Nellie blew out the candle and the room in the attic was swollwed by darkness, except for a slither of moonlight which pushed through the parting where the curtains didn't meet. Edna giggled. Quiet, Nellie whispered. Well don't touch me there, Edna replied. Where? Nellie said. Edna giggled again: There, she muttered. Outside it began to rain.
Maids at Bedtime in London in 1924
TerryCollett
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Nov 15, 2018
Nov 15, 2018 at 4:01 PM UTC
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