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She sat straight and suave by the bar counter. Her brown, wavy hair curved along her delicate waist. Her long and manicured fingers gently held her glass of whiskey and she took sips from it, gazing off into space. She likened the least bit of a celebrated model with high fashion looks or one of a potential bud waiting to be found, but she was beauty unfathomable. So intricately built was her face, that the matted lipstick on her full lips felt honored within its contours and peaks and the eyeliner sought delight in adding a magical depth to her dark brown eyes. But she sat there alone. She was the only glowing light in the dimly lit bar, in the form of an alluring pulchritude, but neither did she have any man flocking within inches of her nor any woman as company. “Sameer! 10 o’clock! In white. God, she’s a stunner!”, Ishaan remarked. “Not now, Ish. I need to send this e-mail to Jeff right now. Gotta impress that American and lock my possibility of a promotion.” said Sameer typing his e-mail with one hand and sipping his beer from another. “Then, we are off from here. Too tired to flirt tonight.”, Sameer responded in an unvarying tone. “I don’t know, man. There’s something about her. Who knows, she’d probably be far better than that chick you wooed last week.”, Ishaan laughed as he said. “The one who cuddled her teddy bear at the end of the night? I felt done, dude.”, Sameer sighed and continued tapping on his keypad. A few minutes later, Sameer veered his head off his smartphone and looked at the direction his friend had been pointing at with a curious expression only a man could produce. She sat there smiling at a group singing the Happy Birthday song aloud for their friend, clanging their beer bottles with each other’s and bellowing cheers. Whilst Sameer sat there staring. She was one of the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. Although, he realised he had associated himself with that statement before, but tonight, this woman raised the bar high. Almost as if struck by an intuition, she turned towards Sameer and their eyes locked for a few seconds before she let go with an innocent smile that almost seemed to ****** him. She continued to drink her glass of spirit and engaged herself in a small talk with the bartender. “Hey, um Ishaan?” “Yeah?” “Let’s go. Gulp your beer down, I’ll be waiting in the car.”, Sameer took one last look at that bedazzling woman and walked out of the bar with a heavy sigh. “You’re funny. A guy like you lets go of a girl who looked so worth the attention which you give to all the other stupid advances out there. Lame.”, Ishaan shook his head and almost looked disappointed. “Well, you should’ve given your shot, if you felt I was being an *** in there.”, Sameer pulled the car off the parking lot. “I don’t think I could have, actually. I could have, but I don’t think I could have, you know.” “What do you mean?” “You can’t deny it but she was fiercely intimidating.” Sameer looked at Ishaan and smiled. Watching the man leave the bar, she drank the last sip from her glass, placed it on the counter with a faint thud, sighed and eventually smiled, tucking the flick of her hair behind her ear.
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Oct 29, 2018
Oct 29, 2018 at 1:14 PM UTC
Intimidating.
She sat straight and suave by the bar counter. Her brown, wavy hair curved along her delicate waist. Her long and manicured fingers gently held her glass of whiskey and she took sips from it, gazing off into space. She likened the least bit of a celebrated model with high fashion looks or one of a potential bud waiting to be found, but she was beauty unfathomable. So intricately built was her face, that the matted lipstick on her full lips felt honored within its contours and peaks and the eyeliner sought delight in adding a magical depth to her dark brown eyes. But she sat there alone. She was the only glowing light in the dimly lit bar, in the form of an alluring pulchritude, but neither did she have any man flocking within inches of her nor any woman as company. “Sameer! 10 o’clock! In white. God, she’s a stunner!”, Ishaan remarked. “Not now, Ish. I need to send this e-mail to Jeff right now. Gotta impress that American and lock my possibility of a promotion.” said Sameer typing his e-mail with one hand and sipping his beer from another. “Then, we are off from here. Too tired to flirt tonight.”, Sameer responded in an unvarying tone. “I don’t know, man. There’s something about her. Who knows, she’d probably be far better than that chick you wooed last week.”, Ishaan laughed as he said. “The one who cuddled her teddy bear at the end of the night? I felt done, dude.”, Sameer sighed and continued tapping on his keypad. A few minutes later, Sameer veered his head off his smartphone and looked at the direction his friend had been pointing at with a curious expression only a man could produce. She sat there smiling at a group singing the Happy Birthday song aloud for their friend, clanging their beer bottles with each other’s and bellowing cheers. Whilst Sameer sat there staring. She was one of the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. Although, he realised he had associated himself with that statement before, but tonight, this woman raised the bar high. Almost as if struck by an intuition, she turned towards Sameer and their eyes locked for a few seconds before she let go with an innocent smile that almost seemed to ****** him. She continued to drink her glass of spirit and engaged herself in a small talk with the bartender. “Hey, um Ishaan?” “Yeah?” “Let’s go. Gulp your beer down, I’ll be waiting in the car.”, Sameer took one last look at that bedazzling woman and walked out of the bar with a heavy sigh. “You’re funny. A guy like you lets go of a girl who looked so worth the attention which you give to all the other stupid advances out there. Lame.”, Ishaan shook his head and almost looked disappointed. “Well, you should’ve given your shot, if you felt I was being an *** in there.”, Sameer pulled the car off the parking lot. “I don’t think I could have, actually. I could have, but I don’t think I could have, you know.” “What do you mean?” “You can’t deny it but she was fiercely intimidating.” Sameer looked at Ishaan and smiled. Watching the man leave the bar, she drank the last sip from her glass, placed it on the counter with a faint thud, sighed and eventually smiled, tucking the flick of her hair behind her ear.
Ishibub
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19/F/India
Oct 29, 2018
Oct 29, 2018 at 1:14 PM UTC
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