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Sometimes I don't feel very poetic, and sometimes I just feel pretty pathetic, because some days I feel like I'm doing fine, but a moment later I want to just die, because theres so much inside that I need to say, but try as I might I can't find the right way, because I feel so alone- Who could comprehend, the pain, the pressure, the ache in my head, so I just resort to going to bed, but sleep never finds me, for it too has ditched, and sometimes I just feel like a whiney ***** because regardless of the ******** and all of this mess, I know that ultimately I have been blessed, it might take not weeks or months, rather years, but I know one day will mark the end of my tears, I might be at the bottom, the worst I could be, but I've got my whole life still ahead of me.
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Dec 22, 2012
Dec 22, 2012 at 4:44 AM UTC
Silver Lining Justification
Sometimes I don't feel very poetic, and sometimes I just feel pretty pathetic, because some days I feel like I'm doing fine, but a moment later I want to just die, because theres so much inside that I need to say, but try as I might I can't find the right way, because I feel so alone- Who could comprehend, the pain, the pressure, the ache in my head, so I just resort to going to bed, but sleep never finds me, for it too has ditched, and sometimes I just feel like a whiney ***** because regardless of the ******** and all of this mess, I know that ultimately I have been blessed, it might take not weeks or months, rather years, but I know one day will mark the end of my tears, I might be at the bottom, the worst I could be, but I've got my whole life still ahead of me.
chandler-lauren
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Dec 22, 2012
Dec 22, 2012 at 4:44 AM UTC
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