~I fell in love, her name was Sleep,
And all my life I could not keep,
Her loving form by my side,
And I slowly began to lose my mind.~

BlueJay1995

Losing Sleep

This is awesome, the rhymes sound great when said out loud, and the whole concept is fantastic!  Brilliant write!

I love this. I have had insomnia for years and this resonates deeply with me. And the way you put it all so simple and to rhyme? Elegant!