She keeps her walls high,
head above water;
her thoughts are deeper
than the ocean, yet,
She's not waiting for
someone to save her.

hanna-siaotong

Ocean like

This piece truly resonates with me. Beautifully written and expressed!

Hi, just read this poem of your
very much like It, your fall together, smoothly they flow
roll off the tongue excellent
Kind regards Johnny

Hi and welcome here. I loved your first poem - short straight but draws a clear image. Waving greetings - and hope to read more from you!