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My name is Hiro and yet I couldn't save you If I hadn't picked up your hat Maybe I would've caught up to you I remember those flames As if I've found hell on earth Your disappearing silhouette continues to replay in my mind As though foreshadowing you leaving from this lifetime Just once I hated your caring nature If you hadn't cared so much You would still be here I am blinded by regret Over something I couldn't control I was close to the flames but I felt so cold As time went still I froze where I was My tears aching to be free My cries wanting to mimic the explosion Like those flames that took you away from me
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 2:43 AM UTC
Your Hiro
My name is Hiro and yet I couldn't save you If I hadn't picked up your hat Maybe I would've caught up to you I remember those flames As if I've found hell on earth Your disappearing silhouette continues to replay in my mind As though foreshadowing you leaving from this lifetime Just once I hated your caring nature If you hadn't cared so much You would still be here I am blinded by regret Over something I couldn't control I was close to the flames but I felt so cold As time went still I froze where I was My tears aching to be free My cries wanting to mimic the explosion Like those flames that took you away from me
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Oct 21, 2018
Oct 21, 2018 at 2:43 AM UTC
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