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Mar y montañas What a great view del balcón Mi alma en paz --- Mountains, city, sea The three meet: ¡Increíble! Thrilled by what I'm shown --- Mar y montañas Mountains, city, sea What a great view del balcón The three meet: ¡Increíble! Mi alma en paz Thrilled by what I'm shown
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Dec 17, 2018
Dec 17, 2018 at 12:31 AM UTC
Mar y Monte
Mar y montañas What a great view del balcón Mi alma en paz --- Mountains, city, sea The three meet: ¡Increíble! Thrilled by what I'm shown --- Mar y montañas Mountains, city, sea What a great view del balcón The three meet: ¡Increíble! Mi alma en paz Thrilled by what I'm shown
Continuing to experiment with poetic forms. Here I combined a few forms and took another stab at writing in Spanish. 2 bilingual haikus - "Baiku"? :) used for a contrapuntal (combining the two by alternating lines to make a third poem), creating a new set of rhyming triplets. It doesn't quite carry a dual meaning like a good contrapuntal but I like the way it sounds anyway.
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Dec 17, 2018
Dec 17, 2018 at 12:31 AM UTC
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