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Starting slow Speeding up Felt unreachable Just my luck The car continues off As I follow with lust I keep following Taking detours Out of trust Soon enough I hit a hole But wouldn’t  stop Due to my stupidity How naive I was For believing I could catch up Instead I should of went faster Not to the car’s limit But to surpass her with my pride She was not all All to me Is me Not her And her silly games Of cat and mouse I have finally surpassed Forgetting my Obession Finally at peace Not begging for her attention My Obession is done Now I may continue on With my pride in mind Never to fall for someone again But that would be a lie Lust will soon rise again Even if I don’t want it to...
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Oct 14, 2018
Oct 14, 2018 at 10:34 PM UTC
I have surpassed the drive
Starting slow Speeding up Felt unreachable Just my luck The car continues off As I follow with lust I keep following Taking detours Out of trust Soon enough I hit a hole But wouldn’t  stop Due to my stupidity How naive I was For believing I could catch up Instead I should of went faster Not to the car’s limit But to surpass her with my pride She was not all All to me Is me Not her And her silly games Of cat and mouse I have finally surpassed Forgetting my Obession Finally at peace Not begging for her attention My Obession is done Now I may continue on With my pride in mind Never to fall for someone again But that would be a lie Lust will soon rise again Even if I don’t want it to...
This part two to the Obession with the car, I have finally got over my Obession, now I may feel at peace with my depression no longer haunted by her presence. Sorry for not posting for a while, school has been quite a trouble. For all of you I will post a poem on oct 24 after my performance at my play. I will narrate and perform my poem for all can appreciate and hear on this date. ❤️
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19/M/Hialeah
Oct 14, 2018
Oct 14, 2018 at 10:34 PM UTC
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