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She lived so effervescently, so vivid, so iridescent The brightness of her life force knew no equal She burnt like oxy acetylene a blinding, blazing, brilliance But once extinguished there can be no sequel For soon her radiant light grew dim Like the flame of a candle dancing in a cold draft Though vulnerable her spirit lingers She knew her days were numbered Like the doors in the hospital corridors Her flame went out, like it was pressed between wetted fingers
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Dec 15, 2012
Dec 15, 2012 at 8:34 AM UTC
The Big C
She lived so effervescently, so vivid, so iridescent The brightness of her life force knew no equal She burnt like oxy acetylene a blinding, blazing, brilliance But once extinguished there can be no sequel For soon her radiant light grew dim Like the flame of a candle dancing in a cold draft Though vulnerable her spirit lingers She knew her days were numbered Like the doors in the hospital corridors Her flame went out, like it was pressed between wetted fingers
mr-bigglesworth
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Dec 15, 2012
Dec 15, 2012 at 8:34 AM UTC
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