girl friend
girl                   friend
girl                                                 friend
girl                                                                               friend
girl                                                                                                             friend
girl

hitoritabiwritings

drift

Jun 5, 2026

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jwdcody

This is brilliant on a lot of levels. Nice work.

messydreamer

oooh! really like your creative interpretation. Many times, we just don't realise that it happens. Nice job btw.

zebrablack

Well I guess I'm the only one who wants you to write out the dark side, upside, inside , outside. If you go up on Instagram there are a million compositional word art poems. Perhaps if you printed them large scale on stretched  canvas but then you'd be competing with painting. So the question is how deep do you dig as a writer, which in turn begs the question how deep do you dig as a soul i.e. your own galactic center? But hay its just my opinion.

removed.-fm3c

thats not nice >:( you should be a friend after a breakup, not just a 'girl'. another person cant remove YOU from a relationship that involved both people. you arent just a 'girl' you were an important moment in that persons life

removed.polaroid-scrabble

yeah.... i guess the girl overcomes the friend at the end; becomes what isn't associated with friendship... an utility unit of society... i like the concept of drifting apart, from a said status, to an ambitious claim of stature - and yes, the synonym proximity could be demanded to erase this comment... i like the spacing... it's like a convergence of what becomes what is made into a pinnacle access... now... i'd love to see the underbelly working away from girl... just joking, i'm not the one to make a case for a further impetus.

removed.-df3s

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Thatcher

i completely understand. which says that you made i all of the way through. 
very cool.

shamamama

love how you used the space bar....great ink...!

scot-2

DEmbrey

Very creative! It's so true that we drift away like that. Sad, too. &#128549; By all means, keep penning!! &#9997;

Bet_poet44

Interesting visually; trying to make a choice and I believe the girl wins out in the end. Nicely done!!!

mango-van-rasp

Very clever.  Should be mandatory piece in 9th grade literature assignments.  Also, always more poignant in retrospect.

patty-mmmmmmmmmm

ASlowHeyoka

Being friends isn't so bad. you know, they always have other friends that might want to boogie one day ;)

Des-ire

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Juni

Great poem. This inspired me to write poetry here again. I took a break, not stopped. But, this? Is definitely what I signed up for. Great work. Keep it up

LMH08

Wow love this! I see the ending as letting go, and finding yourself, not trying to hold onto anything anymore, but just merely being