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The first thing you notice As the clothed self starts to dissolve Is the relaxation. A kind of sinking into the the buoyant world And surrender So is in there too But not capitulation poor and bowed More a fizzy feel for all the Overwhelming all That can be In the curve of fences Seen from trains And blurs of green and soft remembered walks Of girls. Mostly. I have to say. And moon and planets squirrelled through The secret words of electrons to The screen. Food is all around us but we starve.
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Apr 5, 2010
Apr 5, 2010 at 11:39 AM UTC
Oh, Just Relax Will You?
The first thing you notice As the clothed self starts to dissolve Is the relaxation. A kind of sinking into the the buoyant world And surrender So is in there too But not capitulation poor and bowed More a fizzy feel for all the Overwhelming all That can be In the curve of fences Seen from trains And blurs of green and soft remembered walks Of girls. Mostly. I have to say. And moon and planets squirrelled through The secret words of electrons to The screen. Food is all around us but we starve.
jeremy-ducane
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Apr 5, 2010
Apr 5, 2010 at 11:39 AM UTC
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