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who were you? but sweet-smelling hair and rose-tinted cheeks your presence faded but your scent lingered for weeks who were you, but a blinding smile? if it were to rain, and the droplets pounded against the earth, I would've bore their force if it meant that you didn't have to and who was I? but a lonely heart, a jumbled mind with little a feeling left behind my heart blasted itself out of my chest and i couldn't taint you, i would not let myself do it, because for you, there should be only the best so i admired from afar, i sat and i watched, and the swelling of my heart, i could not stop. and i thought, who was I, but your reluctant admirer? but I remember the day it changed the colors you wore were bright and your smile was even brighter and my courage soared higher and higher i waited so long to tell you the truth to tell you that i loved you and that i hoped you loved me too and as soon as you did i swear the world stopped spinning if only i knew that was just the beginning
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Oct 4, 2018
Oct 4, 2018 at 2:02 PM UTC
who were you?
who were you? but sweet-smelling hair and rose-tinted cheeks your presence faded but your scent lingered for weeks who were you, but a blinding smile? if it were to rain, and the droplets pounded against the earth, I would've bore their force if it meant that you didn't have to and who was I? but a lonely heart, a jumbled mind with little a feeling left behind my heart blasted itself out of my chest and i couldn't taint you, i would not let myself do it, because for you, there should be only the best so i admired from afar, i sat and i watched, and the swelling of my heart, i could not stop. and i thought, who was I, but your reluctant admirer? but I remember the day it changed the colors you wore were bright and your smile was even brighter and my courage soared higher and higher i waited so long to tell you the truth to tell you that i loved you and that i hoped you loved me too and as soon as you did i swear the world stopped spinning if only i knew that was just the beginning
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Oct 4, 2018
Oct 4, 2018 at 2:02 PM UTC
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