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Wait! Wait! A pinch of salt in my heart, Keeps inflaming through the halt. Wait! Wait! Some lost in their lives, living with you Some lost their lives for the pain given by you. Wait! Wait! When people meet you,   To the expectations they live up, When people breathe you, To the life they give up. Wait! Wait! To some you yield results, To the most you offered upsets. With perseverance, I get towards my aim, As an interference, you send me back with a shame People exclaim what God say Why fear when I am here. But Mr. Wait. You say Nothing here, when I am near. Through you, I faced disappointment. With your end comes my accomplishment Hello Mr. Wait. I warn you The more you live with me, The more I turn rebellious. The more you give me woe, The more I become your foe. Thank you Mr. Wait. You made me the best Hunter animal with a ferocious killer instinct, I won't leave this instinct, till you become extinct. Challenge for a change, Revenge for an exchange.
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Oct 4, 2018
Oct 4, 2018 at 8:05 AM UTC
WAITING - PAIN OF DEATH WHILE LIVING*
Wait! Wait! A pinch of salt in my heart, Keeps inflaming through the halt. Wait! Wait! Some lost in their lives, living with you Some lost their lives for the pain given by you. Wait! Wait! When people meet you,   To the expectations they live up, When people breathe you, To the life they give up. Wait! Wait! To some you yield results, To the most you offered upsets. With perseverance, I get towards my aim, As an interference, you send me back with a shame People exclaim what God say Why fear when I am here. But Mr. Wait. You say Nothing here, when I am near. Through you, I faced disappointment. With your end comes my accomplishment Hello Mr. Wait. I warn you The more you live with me, The more I turn rebellious. The more you give me woe, The more I become your foe. Thank you Mr. Wait. You made me the best Hunter animal with a ferocious killer instinct, I won't leave this instinct, till you become extinct. Challenge for a change, Revenge for an exchange.
I personified wait as a person. In career, what waiting does? This is is what I wrote. Waiting may be sweeter when it is more personal. But when one is rejected chances due to money, poverty or other reasons, a person is pushed to live with that waiting till the end of his life. Waiting has stolen many successes and even life. This is the central theme of the poem. But, beyond it, waiting offers a never defeating strength to attain an insurmountable task. It gives that Hunter and killer instinct to win with that aggressive spirit. That's what I told in the poem.
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23/M/India
Oct 4, 2018
Oct 4, 2018 at 8:05 AM UTC
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